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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Tapestry fingers unbraid a bitter vine twined into this life of mine some words spoken some of late unsaid make up the bulk of raveled thread wavy strings dangle reaching in yearn a different path unstrung will learn lines designed with cords to believe as I see new patterns in this cloth I weave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got to watch some of those vines... they can choke a tree to death. Wonderful metaphors, Helen... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, Wonderful metaphors, excellent write. Happy New Year |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mine is still in the basket but I reckon I'll start weaving soon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ Your word-threads weave such a lovely tapestry of thought~ *HUGLETS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent! The key to recognizing the weave of karma is understanding the warp of life's lines. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
No one does it better Helen. Eric |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you weave magically - this is great - Paul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Poems like this one are part of the reason why I read every word you write. Not the whole reason, but part of it. |
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