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to the lighthouse....
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to the lighthouse.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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crapola .... let’s make way to the lighthouse where the waves will lap up your tea-cup cheeks and saucer lips mother ..... sigh .... watch out my child-sized friend of many faces with as many places up your sleeve be sure to watch out for the mermaids won‘t you? they’re not so legendary .... yanno? scatter-heart .... don’t let the darkness break you signal that trumpet over the horizon it’s only your ghost passing the breath of sea and you have seen .... many a jilted bride in soaked cloth haven’t you? (don’t deny it) no point in rocking your head bobbing it like a mocker seahorse in your aquarium world you little sea-urchin you c’mon ....? count the steps .... one, two, three, four the first to the top is a rotten .... yup and I’m a priceless baboon. "I can't believe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's a powerful, enchanting, playful way to the lighthouse ... and now I know what a "baboon" is ... Smiling. Love, Margherita |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
Lovely and playful write.. always harash |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Library.... with questions.  Smiling... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...What a lovely write, as always!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, this one tosses my thoughts about like an angry wave with no shore to slam into damn |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
loved the light airy feel to this one Maree, as always, I'm impressed! hugs, Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I like this bella..biting, this one is hugs |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You've got so much style, Maree~ I felt an innocence in your words as well as some deeply rooted emotions. Happy New Year, sweetie~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Bloody hell woman! Give me some of your writing juice... Big hugs...I like it...I'm going to pick your brain over it later...(what's crapola?) love you  SB |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
What she ^^^ said. Some really good lines in this Mmy-- maybe you can 'splain them to me soon--lol hugs J |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much.. K? Jamie? not sure I can explain it, it just had to come out... must've been the cicada's chirping in the mountains yesterday sighhh might go back actually. Once again.. thanks all so very much for your lovely replies. Maree "I can't believe |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ow, you messed with my head from first line to last....and made me like it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
don’t let the darkness break you signal that trumpet over the horizon it’s only your ghost passing the breath of sea and you have seen .... many a jilted bride in soaked cloth haven’t you? (don’t deny it) no point in rocking your head as usual... very well done.. and it leaves me in envy of your talent |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! I'm so happy I uncovered this gem of yours, sweet friend, I was in Missouri during the New Years holiday and missed it! (big angel hugs) What a trip, sweet friend, the imagery is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow... there's a reason I've missed reading you...and this is it... smile... Love this, Maree... hugs... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Maree, the more complex and thought provoking the better. I love writing as the mood hits, but it never comes out as good as this... To the library with this series! ~Tier |
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