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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-12-27 08:32 PM



I Remember Fire


I remember
what fire is
it is
the thing
you are
left with
when you
peel back
the smoke



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
1 posted 2003-12-27 09:18 PM


Smile i always wondered what it was.

Made one to think about, in what order things has to come.

I enjoyed.

Smile

Jes


NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
2 posted 2003-12-27 10:03 PM


Greetings Helen:  Not quite sure what this means, but I read it and reread it and like it very much.

Hugs, Marti

wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
3 posted 2003-12-27 10:07 PM


very cool, creative, nizzeeeee
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
4 posted 2003-12-27 10:11 PM


Yes indeed!  When you're hot...you're hot!

[This message has been edited by icebox (12-27-2003 10:12 PM).]

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
5 posted 2003-12-27 10:13 PM


Smoke?
Ya
Not much fire under this cold fog.

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