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titch k
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since 2003-11-25
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0 posted 2003-12-26 09:14 PM


As childhood dreams an open heart
Continents; Energy, finding expression!
In naked grace, world's of wisdom's might,
can only venture there; Like lessons;

the weave of love ~~ where? ~~ cascaded;
Earth's fertility, whose effortless song chants
Pink Zeppelin bearing Zeus, happy the lover he;
As soon as Spring is born, tears will well

you know in your heart, the throng
of bearing youth; In a world full
of cannabis, pirates; Risky worlds!
Doomed, crying about one's misfortunes!

scatter loves seed, ploughing til the sun
Midst all confusion, this plenary abyss preserve;
These heavenly features, almost free!
But do not think; And for the nonce

like jolly fish with broken tank, sinking
nearer an ice-tap; Bright with heavenly shine,
of Eden's Isles beyond; The needs of thee
and me; Inate; Unerring sweet simplicity

copyright - titch 2003



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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
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1 posted 2003-12-26 09:36 PM


very nice!

[This message has been edited by wintertao (12-28-2003 06:45 PM).]

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2003-12-27 07:14 PM


If ever someone wants to bury words for others to read.

The words remind of visions that people had, or the beauty of what can be, but they are very good, chosen, complex words using something to explore meaning.

regards

Dave

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