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Fair Youth
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Fair Youth |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Fair youth presumes over the ages Internally inconsistent, nevertheless furnishes Strong enough, concerning affirmations Which falls not short nor to loose? Moreover, evoking a winged response Standing out in life’s fraying perfections Significantly pronounced in a tandem of sonnets A welcomed suitor with a certain degree Like a metaphor of summer’s art Such options even focus on pure conscious Ambitious voices of air like an ever playing song Winking smiles and compliments by my side In all powers of night’s heroes, brave remembered ills Oh little mounds in darkest of life’s trials Fair youth presumes or’r the ages Internally inconsistent, nevertheless furnishes Like a far off shine from where the sun falls down Into a place of rippling sunburn vines with beaming reflections Beautiful reflections of flowering times Oh the influence of bright eyes offspring Such rude hurtling seas of loitering painted sky Like a radiant lover among the loveliest stars Welcoming what lies heavy upon the heart Where hope whispers long throbbing words of dawn Touching one’s trembling lips, where fresh blown breeze Of fair youth presumes or’r the ages Which we are never forbidden to see, Homeward brings the children singing Where moonlight lets go of the hours And the moments surrender Turning every boat calm upon the sea And for once the cross carries me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, A perfect end, enjoyed. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Incredibly subtle. So much delight and so much talent... regards Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A passionate write with a wonderful end. Love, Margherita |
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