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Capsulated Heart |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Torn and stitched my capsulated heart followeth to the bottomless pit cloaked in shallowness and sorrow; The throne of kings hath no power to rule the destiny that awaits me in the unrelenting tommorow Torn and sculptured my capsulated heart falleth into an abyss where thy love neither begins nor starts; Within the rememberance of your love my heart calleth To the pilgrimage of thy army’s march: In the midst of battle my knights layeth down their swords They grow weary of the struggle to seize the castles of thy lords My heart cannot prosper for the ruins of thy sanctity hath forsaken me Fall cometh and within the still leaves my heart layeth down to bleed My capsulated heart empty and torn Will find no rest my love, for my blood runneth down thy sword. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch peace to you in the holiday season |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So rich and well done, this despair! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great imagry here...took my mind elsewhere... Perhaps the tapestry of your previous poem. What care mended the heart that once was shattered...but that of love that heals and nurtures rebirth. A cup that is full, has no room for more. Well done. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Forlorn and forsaken are feelings to reckon with to be sure, as is the heart that we allow to harden in our state of sorrow. Great poem, loved your title too. Welcome to Passions RWV~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
RWV... I like your style as well as your words...thank you for sharing all of your passion here with us. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My God! how passionately written!...oh my heart aches with yours....with every beat of pain...I feel it inside your words.... Welcome to PIP....if this is just a taste, I can't imagine the main dish....with poetry like this, your heart should be healed in no time....for the glow of your words attracts moths to a flame...  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-27-2003 03:49 AM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ravenwolf Your words took me to another place in time and for a moment I forgot I was sitting here at my computer. "A poet weaves his words through each verse to create a most beautiful tapestry for us all to admire" Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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