At a local Dunkin Donuts...

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Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-12-26 04:25 AM

At a local Dunkin Donuts, (at 2 am,
the only place still open in this town),
enjoying a toasted bagel with eggs, ham,
and cheese, you suddenly feel bound
to college life, and you can hardly grasp
that in a year, you’ll graduate, and worried,
you walk up to the counter and ask
the kind lady for another cup of coffee.
You always feel dejected during winter.
Not finding the words, you only draw
a question mark upon the foggy window,
and walk outside under the falling snow...

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-12-26 12:16 PM

Not finding the words, you only draw
a question mark upon the foggy window,
and walk outside under the falling snow...

~*~

The answers come.
Usually not in the way we want them,
but come, they do.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-26 01:03 PM

incredible

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-12-26 02:34 PM

You've captured quite a slice of life here,
so simply and nicely done!

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2003-12-28 12:01 PM

a moment succinctly crystallised and captured...this is exactly the kind of poetry that i aspire to write...

wintertao
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

5 posted 2003-12-28 12:06 PM

yes, very nizzzeee !

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

6 posted 2003-12-28 12:09 PM

Enjoyed this pondering write, Master.

C?
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

7 posted 2003-12-28 12:20 PM

I like toasted bagels with plain cream cheese. I prefer Tim hortons. but those are only found in Canada

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2003-12-28 01:13 AM

This is the first time I've read your work -- I liked. You've captured an essence here -- a moment of reality! Happy 2004 and best wishes.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

9 posted 2003-12-28 03:07 AM

looking for to this feeling yet....

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

10 posted 2003-12-28 05:01 AM

liked this alot

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