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icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-12-27 08:00 PM

knowing there's no Hell
wishing you'd be rotting there
is so frustrating

©2003 by icebox

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-12-27 08:40 PM

lol sorry to laugh but...AMEN !!!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-12-27 10:07 PM

Why, thank you Ma'am.

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

3 posted 2003-12-27 10:59 PM

creative haiku, I have come to look forward to your posts and this is no exception; huzzzaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!

DaNi:H
Junior Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 21
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-12-27 11:07 PM

wow.. that's good i think i'm going to like it here.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-12-27 11:24 PM

gave me a little chuckle that had a bitter-aftertaste...That's a good sign.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2003-12-27 11:39 PM

You're not a'kiddin'!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-12-27 11:52 PM

BRAVO!
Man, wish I had written this one!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-12-28 12:35 PM

)))>POW!<(((

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______________Ratleader______________

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-12-28 02:41 AM

You have yourself a dilemma don't you.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2003-12-28 04:29 AM

shaking my head...

this is the ultimate answer to the question,

"What's wrong, baby?"

Mind if I use it?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-12-28 04:42 AM

remind me not to get on your bad side

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2003-12-28 10:07 AM

icebox...Three lines with a big kick!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-12-28 10:09 AM

This one packs a punch...
Love it!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

14 posted 2003-12-28 11:15 AM

In spite of the rot
that follows your every day
your hell is not mine

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (12-28-2003 11:16 AM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2003-12-28 11:43 AM

powerful!!!!!!

This morning there’s a calm I can’t explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

16 posted 2003-12-28 11:55 AM

But sometimes, there is hell on earth.

Peace,

Core

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