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devina
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0 posted 2004-01-17 03:05 PM


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2004 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-17 03:19 PM


bittersweet...very touching write
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2 posted 2004-01-17 04:02 PM


I like it

Nice imaginative gently teasing

Dave

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3 posted 2004-01-17 04:04 PM




(angel hugs) This reminded me so much of Tori Amos and her style of songwriting, this is so beautifully heartfelt! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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4 posted 2004-01-18 09:04 PM


devina -- this was an exquisite poem -- brava for you!
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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-01-18 09:14 PM


Sinking quiet
between your thoughts,
Absorbing blind heat
through the material of you...

Awesome wording. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

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6 posted 2004-01-22 12:50 PM


missed this sis...hang in there!!!
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