Open Poetry #30 |
My Little Tree...(See if Dark Angel will ever make a challenge again) |
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My Little Tree is special It's with me all the time Only two ball ornaments Which works for me just fine There's only just one present At the bottom of my tree You can shake it and unwrap it and then you'll just find it's me I'd like just one more "ornament" I look for one each day An "Angel" for the top of it To "delight" me every way [This message has been edited by Toerag (12-23-2003 12:25 PM).] |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
*grin* You always manage to make me smile hugs, kelly |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Little???? *EG* Oh, well... I'm no angel anyway... *G* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
But there's a huge grin upon my face. Were all waiting to decorate Toerag's tree, Tons of people here, hope there's space? They say his tree is so darn big, People lined up at dawn today ... But wouldn't you know it, we couldn't see, 'Cause Toerag's modesty got in the way! Merry Christmas Toerag, and thanks for all the laughs this year! Happy Holidays Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin [This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-23-2003 01:33 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Toe! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Methinks ye be a naughty boy, but quite "delightful"! Sending your tree ~ and you ~ some angel light! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-23-2003 01:45 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Toerag, I just don't know what to say!! LOL Merry Christmas, you nut!! Ethel |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
Loved the poem and the effect! well done! The only thing I found under my Christmas tree was about 10,000 needles and a dead woodworm!!!! ;-) Steve |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Shame I'm a Dark Angel Enjoyed Toe... Merry Christmas "I can't believe |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I heard about your little tree. It isn't very big. If it were any smaller It would just be called a twig! It's true that it's an evergreen From mold, I would suppose. Why anyone would care to Decorate it, heaven knows. It only gets used once a year And then just for one night. A drooping tree on CHristmas Won't cause screams of delight. So, Toe, enjoy your Christmas tree But next time try a pine. The maids enjoy a tree that stands Both straight and tall....like mine |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
I am NOT believing what I'm reading here...you people are just NOT right...LOL...but darned funny!!! Thanks for the chuckles! Love and Light...jc and...toe...I'm sure Balladeer is wrong...mold doesn't usually grow at this time of year!!! This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This Christmas present we've been given, By Toerag and Balladeer., Is the kind of gift that keeps on livin', Throughout the months and year. It is the gift of laughter and mirth As these scalawags set to pen, Their wisdom and humor, all their worth, From two of the finest men. The poem above, penned by Toe, Is classic rascal at it's best. 'Deer's rejoinder, no less though, Brings laughter from his jest. Merry Christmas, you two scalawags. BTW - The other poems were wonderful, too. Like small Christmas presents I get to open early. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love this Toe, your just wonderful...and this is a delight.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh Christmas tree Oh Christmas tree Please come and delight me Poor Toe’s tree doesn’t seem To have the size to fit So I might have to call ‘Deer And give his tree a sit (Hey, it’s Christmas Eve and I don’t have a tree yet and I have cathedral ceilings so I need something big!) "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Heh heh...love ya Toe! Have a merry merry...and a happy happy! ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You unrepentent shameful creature! You made me laugh at this. And then Balladeer's reply was no less scandalous! The two of you! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey Susan! Come on by, my girl. That means the world to me. Cathedral ceilings? Sure, why not? They are my specialty!! I won't go into detail about How often I've been praised But, when I float down the river On my back The drawbridge must be raised!! So come on down - I'll tell you what On top I'll place a star And you can follow the glowing light From anywhere you are. We'll open gifts and dring egg-nog And sing some solemn hymns. You feel completely satisfied When you're beneath my limbs |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LMAO, Uncle!!! I should have known better! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Toe, awesome awesome write!! Loved how you did this, you never cease to amaze... take care, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO at this thread. It's a good thing I didn't have a hot cup of java in my hand when I read Balladeer's replies. Now I understand what happened to that drawbridge over the ole Miss!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Get the two of them together...(Toe and Deer) and what have you got???? two hot air baloons on a breezy day..... Toooo much.... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, Toe! Always a bit of the devil in you, isn't there, sweet one? Merry Mary! Corinne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Toe...It's the bad boy in the sweet that is so appealing! Hug! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
A post-Christmas response is waaranted for these two rascally scalawags, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahum...I'm too late for the party, I fear. Geesh, and I decided I didn't want a X-mas tree this year. Boy was I wrong. All trees sold out I guess? Damn! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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