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Lie to me....Serenely inspired
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Lie to me....Serenely inspired |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Lie to me and see that I have learned not to question the reason for skin beside me. What more do I need to know of comfort? For as long as any moment it is warm here lie to me always. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn.... and that's no lie.  .........just damn!! In the midst of winter.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
hug your inspiration... she deserves it!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tell me lies...tell me sweet little lies... *echoing Nancy's damn*  I can remember Forever December, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so...were they blonde lies??? |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I'm right there with 'em...Damn! Patricia |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Perhaps it is best to let sleeping dogs lie. (No pun intended) Sometimes there are no answers to the question in the first place. Good call Duncan, gotta love your inspiration. Whatever works I say! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
If she knows that scalawag 'Deer or that rascal Toe, she'll have lots of really good lies to tell, too, Dunc. This poem was nicely written. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
If we accept a lie then we are but just lying to ourselves....in the end every one ends up hurt.. Doesn't sound like much fun to me and maybe something we all know too well.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But, you ole porch puppy, I agree with Susan above... lies just hurt too much when the truth is found out. Now, if it's all a game the two are playing, it's more like fantasy... but in most situations, one of the couple is as serious as can be, and is far from wanting to play games. Well, didn't mean to get so longwinded. I guess that I was lied so much to by my late husband, that it just struck me. A good write that was thought-provoking, Dunc.  Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks ya'll. Just a few lines a poem of Serenity's inspired. Susan...Step away from the soap box.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, is that collar too tight tonight? ROTFL, and loved Lori's reply.  Aw, porch puppies always get hugs, no matter what. ???? OK, I'm waiting for the growl. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
she had nothing left to say so she said she loved me and i stood there grateful for the lie -Gin Blossoms brought this to mind. yup. C  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Quite a dance between yours and Serenity's writings! Liked both! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Not too shabby of an inspire Dunc. Well done... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
:::::::::jumping off the soap box:::::::::: Would you believe, someone had the nerve to recently tell me I analyze too much? The gall.... (In case you didn't get it, Duncan, I enjoyed the writing..it provoked a lot of emotion) [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (12-29-2003 06:47 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love this inspired piece Duncan! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
C'mere puppy...  No words, no lies, eh? Have a happy new year. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Exactly... "No words, no lies." Happy year to you too. "What a long strange trip it's been" [This message has been edited by Duncan (12-29-2003 07:07 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Unfortunately...I'm always telling the truth, because lieing (??) takes too much energy. Ok I'll try....I hate it (see? I can't lie very good, people always know when I'm telling a lie) beautiful written (and that's the truth!) TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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