Open Poetry #30 |
When Pheromones Took Breath Away |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
When Pheromones Took Breathe Away I would be as a virgin butterfly lazily soaring in the air, sunlight warming night cooled wings, unaware of pheromone trails taking breath away – I would be a touch of lace shadowing bare flesh above my heart so your eyes could guess, but not quite see, the hint of naked flesh. I would give your hand the warmth of gentle touch in places no eye but mine has seen, and share with you a passion that would make even angels turn away. I would love you in such a way we’d blind the stars with the light we made, just as I did so long ago – so long ago, in the youth of our days, before age took so much away. Now I’ll just hold your hand, look you in the eye, tell you I love you still – it’s only flesh that years have slowed. Inside the fires still rage, the passion flares and I’m still that butterfly who fell in love that sunlit day, when pheromones took breath away. . . when pheromones . . . took breath away. w.james beard, jr. (c) december 2003 [This message has been edited by jwesley (12-20-2003 11:00 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jimmy...This touched my heart with it's beautiful loving feeling. Thank you! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice to read again Jim... Pretty piece. TD |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
The sentiment behind this one is simply beautiful. Thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a beautiful thought, and write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Now I’ll just hold your hand, look you in the eye, tell you I love you still – it’s only flesh that years have slowed. Inside the fires still rage, the passion flares and I’m still that butterfly who fell in love that sunlit day, when pheromones took breath away. . . when pheromones . . . took breath away." ============================================= Jimmy...as I read this I do believe time stood still... You took my breath away with this beautiful write! Do you mind if I keep this one? Good...cause I love it! Be well m'friend... and may you and yours have a very Merry Christmas! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful !! hugs, Chris |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jimmy, you know this old heart relates well to your words... A touching write. Glad you shared it with us. |
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