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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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How you wound closer, tighter, cleaner only to recoil the slither of cowardice the way you always have ~snake in history of fate Twisted metal night vision captures your silver magpie wanted to keep oh what a season to be alive Matchsticks upon the fireplace all these attempts to burn you to ash ridicule of November. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey gem . . . beautifully penned to ash ridicule this, in itself an oxymoron ash ridicule *smile* no rebirth here for this one nope nope . . . I have missed you and this, is . . . just . . . winter xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-23-2003 07:38 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Good strong write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fascinating mystery. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A fantastic and powerful write, enjoyed very much.  Maree. fate is not just |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"oh what a season to be alive Matchsticks upon the fireplace all these attempts to burn you to ash ridicule of November." Wonderful write Gem! I've missed reading your words. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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PseudoPoet Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 18 |
Amazing writing! |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"How you wound closer, tighter, cleaner only to recoil the slither of cowardice" Ain't that the way they seem to work eh? Excellent write m'dear Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi my little friend. I mis you and wish you would come back.  With love and hugs,  Ethel Mae |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Simply stunning, wonderful work!! I like this very much, thanks for the read  Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I saw this and got excited thinking you were back. We miss you Gemma!!  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I miss you too gemma, gemma! Love the vivid images in this. Outstanding poery, as always. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I miss you too  |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Fantastico Gemma - super poem with a venomous bite. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
those last lines are the kind that echo in the mind ... matchsticks upon the fireplace another attempt |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
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