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Open Poetry #30
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lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 93
Indiana

0 posted 2004-01-02 04:27 PM



The halls of the night echo your name
Bounce the anger
On and off again
How quickly the walls forget
I was made for you
And you were made for her
To reject--

The lights in your Eyes blind me
But guide me through everything-See
What she's doing to you
You're doing to me
Oh, the cobwebs never end

So easy to forget
Am I?
You said It Hits Too Close To Home.

I want to crawl to the front of your mind
If I have to bleed myself dry
If I have to die inside everyday
I want to be out of the hole
Crawling to the front of your mind

© Copyright 2004 steph - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2004-01-02 04:40 PM


The walls hold no memory of me
since I was the one to get free
but they bleed out all my desire
as the flames I lit burn higher.

You wrote such a beautiful and touching piece and I had to ruin it ...sorry.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



chrissydome
Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73
germany
2 posted 2004-01-02 04:43 PM


how painfully touching! great work!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

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