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The Unknown Man
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The Unknown Man |
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Kazeru Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31 |
Mommy, who is that man? Who walks through the rain alone Never seeking shelter Mommy, who is that man? Who sits there in the diner Always looking at a picture Mommy, who is that man? So full of regrets against life That he chooses to be alone Mommy, who is that man? Staring back at me when I gaze into the mirror... ->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<- |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karezu -- innocent questions of a child can cause much pain sometimes. Also, a child is usually the one to embarrass the one he loves the most. Sometimes it would be easier if they didn't ask questions, huh? |
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Kazeru Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31 |
actually I tried to convey the lost innoncence of someone whose broken heart hast triumphed  but indeed children do ask questions you would not dare ask, and yet it is this simple innocence that makes children so great ->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<- |
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serenities_blood Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56New Zealand |
it is very innocent and portrays that we all have questions about ourselves and we are all curious of the way we act sometimes  xoxLORxox |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
..... this is great write, you have developed this person (self) so well.... wd. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful write, Kazeru. "When your life is tossed and turning |
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