Open Poetry #30 |
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When An Old Love Comes New - (once more) |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
When An Old Love Comes New ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() When an old love comes new and smiles just for you You realize while smiling through tears that he wears the same eyes you've dreamed of for years~ When an old love comes round with laughter and song singing classics he wrote with notes that belong to memories made before it was known he was meant to sing them for you all along~ When an old love burns new in embers revived touched by the breeze on softly-felt sighs~ You know that the song is meant to be sung in gentle notes of treasured renew bringing raptured pleasure to be shared by two~ *Repost from two years, one month and seventeen days ago* ~Because my heart is filled~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful poem. I especially liked the line: "singing classics he wrote with notes that belong to memories made before it was known he was meant to sing them for you" classy and classic line. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
This is beautful Marge. When old love is new. Ah.....The beauty, the warmth. Such a wonder. Love and Hugs Bon-Bon ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis ~Because my heart is filled~ The above makes me smile. ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww beautiful lady your words are poetry indeed.....I always enjoy to read your beautiful thoughts, ((hugs)) Charisma |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Some songs are meant to be sung forever. ![]() ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ Thank you ALL .. my joy is complete~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
bringing raptured pleasure to be shared by two~ Yes, dear Marge, your heart is filled with love to overflow and you show it beautifully. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwww Marge how beautiful penned, you write from your loving heart. Happy New Year to you and your beloved ones. ![]() Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, ![]() ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
funny how good we are at counting the days ![]() |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Marge Somehow I missed this before, but it is lovely. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your looking good Marge...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your heart overflows into your pen and graces us with the eternal beauty of love you feel...Stunningly beautiful... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm glad your heart is filled and that your pen blesses us with the outpouring...Happy New Year dear friend ![]() |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
I am new and would have missed enjoying this beautfiul work if you had not shared it again. I love the part: "You realize while smiling through tears that he wears the same eyes you've dreamed of for years~" ah yes....the memory of his (blue) eyes. Could we all be so lucky to have a second chance at love? Youngatheart |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"When an old love burns new in embers revived touched by the breeze on softly-felt sighs~" Lyrical poetry, very nice....:-) Good choice of pictures.. A lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it... ______ice ><> |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi Marge... *Sigh* This is beautiful, as always. I love reading your work, as you know. B ![]() "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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mara marti Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 10Chicago, Illinois |
Hello I am a new member and so far I love this website, your poem was so beautiful, it really touched my heart.I hope to get to know you and everyone else here. It really seems like a great environment.Good job.Take care. Mara |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all so very much for letting me know you enjoyed reading this re-post from my heart~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I didn't read this the first time around for some reason. So glad I got to read it today. Beautiful and shining with renewed love! Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful, Marge -- think I'll save it. lol......jo |
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