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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-01-04 06:17 PM

Alone In June

One day in May I found myself
saying goodbye to my girlfriend
who would be graduating in June
and soon I would never be
seeing her again...
Well...I did one time,
me and her friend visited
her in Bullhead City, but
she already had a new boyfriend.
He was a Marine and she wrote me
later, after the marriage, and told
me his personality was too extreme
and he beat her up because she was
a soft touch and after a while
it all became too much.
She wished she could come back to me,
but I had already met someone new
and life goes on without you.
Don't ever let them go, when
you think you've found the one,
because you'll wake up alone
in June and find them gone.
It doesn't take too long
and they'll be gone.

JamesLee
January04
2003

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-01-04 06:33 PM

Sad write here James...
you are right...when you find the right on...hang on tight.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

EverRuss
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 66
Indiana

2 posted 2004-01-04 06:41 PM

very wise words..when you do find the one you hold on to them and never let go

Russell

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-01-04 06:53 PM

Your memories do hold a lesson!
Lovely, James.
Love, Margherita

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2004-01-04 07:03 PM

This is so sad, but so beautiful.
I really like this poem!
Hang in there!

-katie-

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2004-01-04 08:41 PM

Oh, James, James, James...

Beautiful write...another sad story, though!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

6 posted 2004-01-04 09:49 PM

true words from an all to real situation, but experience becomes a teacher that we all should(but don't)learn from--thanks for sharing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-05 02:42 AM

that's hard...ouch

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-01-05 02:45 AM

I hear a song here........enjoyed.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-01-05 03:07 AM

I agree with iliana; I hear a song, too.
I feel for you the lost of May.   Very nice flow to this.
                        Sadie

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (01-05-2004 03:08 AM).]

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

10 posted 2004-01-05 03:21 AM

Don't ever let them go, when
you think you've found the one,
because you'll wake up alone
in June and find them gone
so sad, you have stated the reality of life dear.

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