Open Poetry #29 |
Stick Figures ......Net affairs |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like stick figures we communicate in dots and dashes bouquets tossed and crosed letter t's and i's bookends/silhouettes on either side of glass palms press as we grasp for truths it hides we hypthosize spin romance between typed lines and rhymes yet only our auras really touch for now though there is solace and sadness knowing we can delete eachother anytime [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-08-2003 09:57 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This speaks truth. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'll never forget my affair with a fantastic lady from Montreal...I was falling in love with her...one word after another...finally she told me that I was becoming too attached to her and she cancelled the affair...all this on line, never meeting, but talking of it...never again...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,,
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
These things do happen, but turning them off is cold comfort, if you can do it at all. Better to find the key and turn it in the lock, fight to keep what has come to you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
bookends/silhouettes on either side of glass palms press as we grasp for truths it hides Loved your poem girlie, and those lines most of all! Talk about setting ourself up!! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Yep, these very rarely seem to work out although there are a few exceptions.Penned well. Crystal |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes and happening more and more the last few years , computers full of broken hearts and tears Hope |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very cool, and very true...don't delete me Michelle! Jason |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks boys and girls, |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Sounds like my life sometimes. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh yes, long distance i do not reccomend, its so easy to hide behind yer screen. works for some, i'm sure, but naaaaa. There are FAR better things to do on the net than find love. (buying clothes) |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
inkedgoddess, i know of what you write, my very first post in here was similar to this, will repost it. "Cyber Screens" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never thought of this...what a perspective. |
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