The Fallen Ones - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-12 09:06 PM

Do you think
you could blow them away
with a simple tool?
sweep aside the fallen ones?

How pretty they congregate
on concrete!
autumn's colored confetti.

Come the winter solstice
they will disperse like mice,
gearing up for the harsher days.

Sanitize, purify, whitewash,
they'll only fly back up
in your face again

Look in the pond where some
of them are stranded.

Can you see your own reflection?
perhaps to drift among them
some day.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-11-12 09:10 PM

excellent Mish

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-11-12 09:26 PM

Sanitize, purify, whitewash,
they'll only fly back up
in your face again

Look in the pond where some
of them are stranded.

You continue to blow me away!
So good on ya, girlie~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-11-12 10:11 PM

(smiles) Oh Michele, I love the artistic vision of this, sweet friend, I love playing in the leaves and I have seen them out on the lake too, they reflect such beautiful colors! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-11-12 10:55 PM

Wow...wow wow...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-13 03:57 AM

*big smile*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-11-13 05:58 AM

lovely, Michele
*s
M

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-11-13 09:39 AM

nice

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2003-11-14 05:45 AM

Well done....an imaginery I havent had since the southward move.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.