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Sometimes Even The Words...
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Sometimes Even The Words... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Tears flow freely splashing onto pages~ seeking to feel anything.... Anything at all other than this unrestful feeling that has settled deep within my soul, and words b l e e d onto moistened pages as my thoughts flow out in pen. Even this release of words is not enough to cause this uncertainty to stop~ and I try Lord, I try*~* but sometimes even the words are not enough... It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How well I know these emotions as they drip through the soul and on to the dry, dry feelings... let it go, dear, let it go... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Even this release of words is not enough to cause this uncertainty to stop~ and I try Lord, I try*~* but sometimes even the words are not enough..." I hear ya pretty lady...and I understand. Just drift for awhile... You've come a long way when you look behind you. Love ya! Nancy. ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
often the words are not enough and only act to focus us on the ache or the restless unknown... in part... you are angry..and that anger does not yet surface or is not yet focused on the things you are angry at... the words... as much as you sometimes feel they are inadequate, however, are a beginning.... hope you find peace soon... hugs |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestOfSpirits~ When you spill thoughts that touch another ... you have to know that you have the pen-power to change the internal thoughts into words of gentle sharing~ Enough ? ... well, if not - try a  on for size !Love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This was both heartfelt and beautiful... and I know exactly what you are saying. Sometimes, the words aren't enough, but HE hears them nonetheless, and that is what makes all the difference. take care. Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, I feel like giving you a loving, comforting hug. You truly are a gentle spirit and shame on anyone or anything that causes these tears of sadness to fall. This was a beautiful, yet oh-so-sad, piece of fine poetry. Love & healing hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, you are a most gorgeous and gentle spirit and no one deserves to be hurt like this and I know despite the tears and anger, you will only grow stronger and new words will emerge that will bring rainbows to you and make Him smile as you proclaim new found courage! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send extra special angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
  sister.....how this reached right in and grabbed me.....hugssss youLauren~ The way you move me |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I too feel write with tears, I told it good to express emotion writing, Poem I enjoy, you feel better, be happier |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know, I keep telling myself to toughen up! Which doesn't work all of the time, but it works some of the time...guess I should be grateful for that! Hugs Donna~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
OUCH!!!!!!!!!! This one is a shot right through the heart. man, do I ever know this. You have done a great job at describing a rough thing... We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all you can do is try, and keep trying |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Oh I know this... and it is desperate  Keep hangin on, and keep bleeding the words... its all there is sometimes. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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