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Open Poetry #29

The Perfect Kiss

Mor-Estal Landis
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 10
Luca, Ventoren

0 posted 2003-10-07 07:14 PM

Clam and Soothing, your voice is moving.
Mystic and enticing, your gaze is revitalizing.
My love, my lass, when I kiss you I want it to last.
I’d give everything just to see you smile.
I know it may seem steep, but it would be worth my wile.
To cry your tears, to suffer your years.
I would take away your pain,
Mask it with our love, to make our gain.
You’re my sweet angel, my addiction, my high,
You’re my only chance in life, please don’t let me die.
Hold me tight, for I’ll do the same for you.
Love me forever, as I love you to.
Don’t let it be false, you know mine is true.
I’d walk to my end,
I’d slave until my will bends.
I’d give up my life, my light, my happiness,
to ensure you just one everlasting moment of bliss.
I’d do anything, even just to imagine,
Your mystical, enticing, perfect kiss…

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-07 07:15 PM

Strong, and lovely.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-10-07 07:18 PM

Mor-Estal Lan,
I think you said it all. Enjoyed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-10-07 08:23 PM

Wow! That would be some KISS!--the "Perfect Kiss"!!!

Welcome to Passions! Sounds like you will fit 'write' in here!

Warm, welcoming hugs,

Earth Angel

P.S. Kissing is my favourite food, next to angel food cake!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-10-09 12:18 PM

Nice...James

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-10-09 12:23 PM

Welcome to Passion's.This was full of strength and love and will carry you too many happy days.

Crystal

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

6 posted 2004-01-06 10:18 AM

Beautiful, beautiful...I actually haven't read that one yet. I like it.

When you twist around to see the past you're missing your chance to glimpse the future.

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