Open Poetry #29 |
Just to spite God |
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I turned the TV on… And then I turned my music up. Singing at lungs edge And breathing with my heart beat tears. It’s just so lonely tonight. So quiet I can’t take it Come and tell me I’m all right, ‘Cause I always have to fake it. Come on, the pain is overwhelming, I’ve been reading just to spite God… I can laugh at my existence I’ve been sobbing with reality. And tomorrow comes so quick And each day passes so slow. I’ve been feeling rather sick. I just wanted you to know… That I need someone beside me, To hold me in their arms… And to make the silence go away It’s just too much to face today… Alone. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I just wanted you to know… That I need someone beside me, To hold me in their arms… And to make the silence go away It’s just too much to face today… Alone." I understand this feeling, Alyssa. You've written it well. Hugs to you... ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-04-2003 03:21 AM).] |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
very moving. a vivid portrayal. thank you Peace, Joe |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
vlraynes, Thank you for your reply. I think all of us know this a little, don't we? Sad, though. Oh well. Again, thank you mystic, no, thank you! Not sure how vivid it really is.. but its my night tonight, so its certainly real. Good to meet you by the way, haven't been here much lately, so I missed you're entrance! Take care... Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (10-04-2003 03:47 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alyssa, I know it's not much but for what it's worth, I love you |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Aww Dixie, its worth alot thank you very very much, and, I love you too Aenimal, I'll take that as a compiment, especially from you. Thanks Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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