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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-10-03 11:20 PM

I traveled back inside myself
to find the wayward rhyme,
the chrysalis-paralysis:
twas such a simple time.

Gone timidly in imagery
from dreams I now debate
Was better not to venture out?
-to see what lies in wait?

I have a thousand books in me
Achieving? Grieving more!
This want to write a single song
of wish I had before.

And so it goes with ball and chain
of poem husbandry:
Swing the links and smooth the chinks
then smack with imagery.

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

1 posted 2003-10-03 11:28 PM

Yep, this is a good'un Walt.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-10-03 11:34 PM

(smiles) And it is funny how rhyme goes somewhere but it has no direction, it takes you all kinds of places with no clear destination yet it all sounds complete sense in the end! (big hugggsssssss) It's great to see you back, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-10-03 11:53 PM

OH...I love this, Walty...the word
play...the ALL of it. Excellent!
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

4 posted 2003-10-04 03:53 AM

very, very, good. magical mystical twistical. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2003-10-04 07:13 AM

hehehe big thanks to all

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2003-10-04 07:28 AM

Yep that's it Walt ya hit it right on and then salt it with some slangtactical abundance.......They were going to call me altruistic at birth but my Pappy's boss's name was Al....He didn't like it.

This is an inner song of concludence....

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2003-10-04 07:29 AM

heheh thanks et your reply brought a laugh

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-10-04 09:26 AM

Walt~
How WONDERFUL seeing you making the time to make some rhyme~

I truly adore this piece~
A lovely cadence of imaged wording~

Hoping you'll find time to *gift* us with more and more and more~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-10-04 09:29 AM

Walt, I love this rhyme travel.
Beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2003-10-04 10:47 AM

hehe thank you it is fun to get reads from you

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