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James McInerney
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 83

0 posted 2003-10-01 03:44 PM

“Too many What If`s”

What if you loved, or if you cared, or even dared?
What if your heart didn’t start when you stared?
What if your mind couldn’t stop thinking of me?
What if you knew it but you just couldn’t see?
What if it happened then how would you feel?
What if the thoughts in your head became real?
What if you loved me if only the once?
And pictured the future being us?
What if I wrote this to remind you of me?
What if it worked?
Then where would we be?

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-10-01 05:41 PM

You are right about this James, there are too many what ifs
Good write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-10-01 08:05 PM

enjoyed the read,,,

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-10-02 10:46 PM

Great words written, welcome to PIP!

look forward to seeing more!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-02 11:06 PM

(big hugggssssssss) There are too many "what if's" and not enough "how abouts"! (sad sigh) You speak of this emotion ever so well, sweet friend, I send angel comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!