Open Poetry #29 |
Falling From The Fall |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Falling From The Fall green formed veins stemming from branches drinking full a spring’s sugary tears of life clinging closely to the hand that created it innocence uncurled in the virtue of pure ignorance summer found foliage tightly huddled in tender caress behind each other safely hidden from the heat whispers echoing from the roof of bark to become a silent lapse of time and then it came to be temperatures changing divided into season lowering to degree a distracted illusion a fallen disappointment moving from upright to downward spiral red and golden emotions exploded guiltlessly in sapless gasp floating softly in memory for one last good bye kiss where leaves find themselves on the roots of winter and death is not beautiful "wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow... this is...wow. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
...but real. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
You look at beauty and see other things, this called insight, poem is good |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, as a boy I also had this insight of autumn and winter, when the flowers die and animals hibernate and wind makes a haunting howl, it truly does feel like death and that is why I like spring MUCH more than autumn! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Darren Junior Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 30 |
That was simply amazing Helen. Although I disagree, there is beauty in death. For without it life would lose all meaning. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
...*mouth hanging open* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thank you. It was good to take this walk with you, through the essence of it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Yeah, WOW is it! No words! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You've such insight that others see only through your words. Crystal |
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