Open Poetry #29 |
It's More |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It isn't the way the sun touches your face in the mornings, when its just us. It isn't the way the stars fall into your eyes then laugh back at me. It isn't the way your hand always finds mine right before sleep. It isn't the way you look it isn't the things you do it isn't what you say. It's more. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Simple little poem, clearly written. I like! Larry |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh so very sweet. Exactly the words I needed to see at this very moment. Glad I came. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful!! this shows your love clearly. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Paula, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, and may love, the most gorgeous thing in all the world, forever sing in your heart and continue to show you all the beauties it is, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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