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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Okay, okay, let's drip the wax seal the correspondences-- satisfaction pressing this with the markings of what was... "Tell me" "Say, how, do y'do?" Is that a scuff on saddle-shoe? Tell me, that's the best you'll do and give me bitters in a cup. I grant a hiccup in response. "How are you?" I am not well. Furnace stoked as embers dwell Rage contained in glowing gloss there within the bowels of toss-- a shovel flat-head digs the grave. "How are you?" I am the same. Hungry hungry hippo snout-- Santa is a bullshit game. Eat the pebbles call the name backward Atnas note: how plain of coding there in understand-- I'll file that in my head. "Denny's" welcoming repast Grand Slam id the break--of fast-- Six a.m I greet my doom... I eat my sloppy eggs and drool watching them prepare the spread of the buffet I denied-- I toss a five of smoke in curl and wanting...IT I see the sky and cars are barely in my eye-- metal hedging on the ramp. I watch the sun make steppe in sky-- I'll file that in my head. I paid. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-02-2003 03:56 AM).] |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
some quite vivid imagery, but out of my concrete reach. abstraction just makes me think I'm dumb. thank you for the write Peace, Joe |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
What have they been feeding you? send me some? |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...WOW, Your mind must be running at warp speed. I'm still trying to get the ALL of this but for now I feel like Joe Sort of dumb. Many many thoughts to ponder in this piece. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"How are you?" I am not well. Furnace stoked as embers dwell Rage contained in glowing gloss there within the bowels of toss-- a shovel flat-head digs the grave. "How are you?" I am the same. ~*~ How DO you do...it? Smiling... nodding... knowing... |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Not only vivid but incredible writing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity.  Enjoyed.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantabulous Karen....fantabulous. Maree  fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (10-02-2003 08:52 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Hungry hungry hippo snout-- Santa is a bullshit game. Eat the pebbles call the name backward Atnas note: how plain of coding there in understand-- I'll file that in my head." (big hugggssssssss) Matutinal continental breakfast runs sure can be an epic, sweet friend, the sun our hero, the pineapple juice a comedy and the rubber cement eggs a tragic downfall sometimes! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I absolutely love this, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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