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The fallen must call (collaberation with Cpat's permission)
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The fallen must call (collaberation with Cpat's permission) |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Lord by faith I hang upon Your every word concentrating moment by moment on not letting go. Like a crash and burn movie life time after time flicks images upon hurt and damages upon emotions intent on altering- on owning- the path before my eyes and Lord I know I know I know that faith must hold tight and Lord I know that I must focus on not letting loose. But Lord it seems I am but a would be saint far from perfect and there is no way for me under my own power to get back up there from down here except to call Your name and look to You for help. The fallen must call, Lord lift me up please hear my implore. Hear me for I now come bent yet to break for you have made me resiliant in your mold then tempered me in the forge of this world I would ask only the words to say that encourage another and find succor in my heart Hear me, please for I know and need to make it through just one more day but only My Lord if you teach me how to pray *I have only collaberated once before, and I am honored to present this as 'one' with such a talented poet as Ron* [This message has been edited by jellybeans (10-02-2003 03:49 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
You know... I feel the grate of the internal here..on the spiritual and know it abrades.. some would say hold on... you write it well my friend... too well for it to be pretend.. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you my friend......you always read between my lines...too well for pretense to hide.... thank you... |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
"they shall mount up with wings as ealges" and you shall rise. blessings, and thank you. very nice Peace, Joe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
may I share your prayer... hugsss M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The fallen must call, ~*~ and He hears. And, what Cpat said so very well... JB, where have you been? We've been missing you. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
n2 thank you for your wonderful quote  M-yes of course, whenever 2 or more are gathered in his name *jb reaches out her hand to you* sunshine...sigh...too long a story to tell, and it ain't over yet....double sigh...am hanging in, but barely...thank you for your thoughts and for missing me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) This is a most beautiful prayer straight from your heart, dearest friend, this would fit perfectly into Spiritual along with your "Prayers for the Slowly Living" series! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Hear me for I now come bent yet to break for you have made me resiliant in your mold then tempered me in the forge of this world I would ask only the words to say that encourage another and find succor in my heart Hear me, please for I know and need to make it through just one more day but only My Lord if you teach me how to pray |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah Cpat, second time today you bring tears to my eyes...the two, yours and mine should be combined into a collaberation. they perfectly compliment each other....thank you so much for this addition *smile* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jellybeans I am touched by this, as well as Ron's reply.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
my friend... you have always inspired me with your words... and while you and I never would see eye to eye on God...( chuckling) I know the feeling all too well.... feel free to join them..if you wish.. they were offered out for you to do with as you would... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lovely write gal....when your writing matches your legs....you'll be the most successful poet here.... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
noah, yes it will end up in my series for the slowly growing closer, but I have misplaced my disk and don't know what number I am up to...thank you for your caring comments martie, thank you...much cpat, thank you, for your kindness and for permission *smile* toe.....lolol...you always make me smile, you mean they don't already match?....then me and my writing ain't got a chance, my legs and I are getting older each and every day....*smile* [This message has been edited by jellybeans (10-02-2003 03:50 PM).] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
and cpat? someday I pray we do see eye to eye on this very important subject *smile* I pray your words will grow to live inside your heart as they do in mine hugs my friend |
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Nina Jeffries New Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 3 |
God always hears those who need to rise You have reached the end of your demise Trust you will be as fine as the fine poem you have given us With love Nina |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Poem and response do go together so very well... very moving, excellent work! *S* You two write well together... could we please have more? *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
Nina, thank you very much suthern, as sparse as my muse has been, Cpat would be doing all the writing...but *gleaming grin* considering the way he writes, that might not be such a bad idea *smile* thank you lady |
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