Open Poetry #29 |
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In Mirrored Reflection |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Reflections in the mirror all I can see is that what you have left behind tattered, worn, with no beauty left inside, no...I can not run from the mirror... and no longer can I hide. I try to stare past into what used to be... but reflections in the mirror are all that I can see.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-01-2003 03:06 PM).] |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I really adore the truth in this, the honesty. Thank you. ![]() |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna...Your true reflection is the one from your heart, and I see nothing but kindness & grace. That other mirror reflects only what he wants you to see. Throw it away. Take Care....Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
After lots of soul-searching, and lots of tears, all of that, and time, it gets better. I hope you heal speedy. ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (10-01-2003 04:25 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So sad, but so efficiently expressed. Look deeper, past the past and past the pain ... your radiance shines through, promise! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I try to stare past into what used to be... but reflections in the mirror are all that I can see.... mirrors have a habit, by design, of not being able to look into the past...only into the now... nicely done... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nicely said, Donna. Hugs to you, my friend... ![]() When the power of love overcomes the |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now don't be making me send you a new mirror...for what I see...is a survivor.... ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
again my thanks to all, hugs. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-02-2003 08:19 AM).] |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Donna you know that I know. ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
SE I do know that you know. You know how much I enjoy Tobies music and today I think the fav line stuck in my head is "I'm getting by but the truth is I'm still standing knee deep in yesterdays rain..." ah...sing it Toby. ![]() It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Toby Keith...Nancy asks? ![]() Donna...you are a survivor... and you've come a long long way... There is a beautiful lady in the mirror looking back at you. ~Smiles & Heart Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy... thank you for your support.. always. Heart hugs back atcha... oh um yeah...Toby Keith the song is called (I think..don't have the cd cover with me today..) Yesterdays Rain [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-02-2003 01:53 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Donna, I usually don't listen to country music (though I absolutely love the Dixie Chicks) but I've heard about Toby Keith and this is a beautifully inspired poem, sweet friend, I love it, you always write with heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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