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Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-09-22 12:58 PM

I lost you, haven’t I?
I won’t acknowledge it.
My words fall silently
like autumn foliage.

I’m like an empty church
when mass has ended.
I’m Christ, with open arms
that hang suspended.

No, don’t look back, my love!
Allow the Hennessy
to drown my farewell breath.
Ignore my jealousy!

Ignore my love for you, --
I’ll love regardless!
My eyes gaze somberly
like autumn puddles.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (09-22-2003 02:01 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-22 01:21 AM

very nice,,,

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-09-22 09:34 PM

Master~
Deeply felt ... very touching~
*huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-09-22 10:18 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Andrey, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I know that empty church feeling and may love very soon return to your heart and be a full church chanting love songs like kyries and hymns filling the air! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrey, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-09-25 12:40 PM

....Damn it. I can't find the words. I've been sitting here and I can't find them....

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-09-25 12:44 PM

I feel this, Andrey.

Hugs to you...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-09-25 02:27 PM

I read this
the other day.

I still don't
know what to say...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2003-09-25 04:17 PM

I have truly missed your work. The feelings you convey in your poetry simply hit me like a ton of bricks (now that was really original) but, like Karilea I read this the other day too, and really can't say anything more than "Wow!"

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