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Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2003-09-25 09:16 AM

Listen to the silence
Hear it tread on steady waters
A tear is not heard until it screams
Laughter unnoticed, a smile forlorn
A stream of pain is held too long
The face of a woman deceives the day
The cry of a woman impermiates the night
Hanging hearts can bleed eternal
The hope it hides can die today
Embrace the truth
Prolong no anguish
Seek the faith of a coming day
Softly touch and gently speak
A kind word returns as rage
A tender kiss can be forgotten
Take hold the hand of diligence lost
Wipe away the glance of lonely dismay
Watch them fall
Feel them burn
See as he holds your hurt in his hand

Copyright ©2003

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-25 09:20 AM

"A tear is not heard until it screams"

One amazing line of many!

Welcome to PIP!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-09-25 09:21 AM

Ku'uipo~
Welcome to Passions~

You have many lovely thoughts in this entrance poem~
Makes for a tender read~

Enjoy your stay in this circle of poetic friendship~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-09-25 09:22 AM

Very wise and deep poem. Welcome to Passions I hope you stay awhile.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-25 09:23 AM

Welcome to Passions!
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-09-25 03:33 PM

All I can think to say to this is...siiigh...

Welcome to passions. Hope you find that you like it here!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-09-25 03:41 PM

This is a very good first post....makes the reader think, which is good. I hopr that you like it here at Passions In poetry.
and, welcome!!

Hugs

Ethel

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-09-25 03:45 PM

Hanging hearts can bleed eternal
The hope it hides can die today
Embrace the truth
Prolong no anguish
Seek the faith of a coming day

absolutely beautiful! I loved this.

squeeze:

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-09-25 03:58 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is such an honest and heartfelt debut, sweet friend, your heart pours out with love and compassion here that mends and heals the wounds, yay, they say a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down and your heart has given us all a daily dose, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fantastic poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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