Open Poetry #29 |
You Never Said Goodbye |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You Never Said Goodbye Remembering yesterdays Yet I know they have gone I hold them dear to my heart All the memories live on Only wish things could be Alike the yesterdays past Why is it those good times Never ever seem to last Held for memory keeping Archived from yesteryears Often I write how I miss you My eyes filling with tears All those moments collect Once again I began to cry Always hoped of your return As you never said goodbye HopeĀ©2003 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This aches, and is also well penned. I'm moved, deeply. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
your feelings expressed well,, this kind of reminds me of being loved and not given a kiss,,,
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Kaoru for your equally touching reply Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you QjQ , yes very similar as being loved and not kissed ,he is someone I have missed , someone I shall never forget although we have never met Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
come'ere and lemme hug ya |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
hey thanks Dixie , you know hugs across miles do bring me smiles Hope |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
They never say good-bye because most are cowards. Going through this myself right now. You couldn't have worded more perfectly |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Pouring Jewels , yes I agree some are quite gutless .... I actually wrote a poem titled " The Cowards Way Out " it is in the Archive 26 dated 4/29/03 Hope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ My friend, you do write such lovely touching pieces~ AND, what's this AGAIN ... I see you in my mailbox - From LovingYou.com LOVE POEM OF THE DAY FOR 9/24/03 ----------------------------- An Open Book I Maintain by Hope (and I won't post the content of your poem) BUT ... as always .... It's gorgeous ! CONGRATULATIONS ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Marge for your kind reply and those special Marge "huglets " and yes another nice surprise being voted "Poem of the day ' once again Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I see from Marge that you still post at lovingyou.com and continue to make their admired list...I remember those days. Meeting in real sometimes makes those "never saying goodbyes" even harder. hugs Maureen |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Maureen , yes still go to LovingYou.com 6 years later and yes I do remember those times , hey its still the same guy that brings out these emotional rhymes Hope |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Painful. Thank you for sharing this. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
And sometimes you never can... I loved the way you wxpress this Hope. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
All those moments collect Once again I began to cry Always hoped of your return As you never said goodbye Hope, this is beautiful. You can write sad love poems better than anyone I've ever read. Even though sad, they are always beautiful. Hugs Ethel |
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