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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-10-01 10:46 AM

Cinnabar & Iron Gall

This…
is as deep as a feeling
may delve

It would require
a mixture
of cinnabar and iron gall ~
then a special form
of calligraphy

if you were to view
only
the words left behind

of the depth

of a soul

in search

~*~

Combining potions
Extracting soul emotions
A spirit in gasp

~*~

Cpat Hair

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Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-10-01 10:50 AM

you create here... the outlines for something part mystic and part physical that expresses a great deal..

nicely done "K"

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-10-01 10:58 AM

very good thoughts expressed,,,

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-10-01 11:06 AM

Oh wow...!!!
Eric

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-10-01 11:10 AM

"A spirit in gasp"

Deep thoughts expressed here...
deeper still the feelings this evokes from within me.
Well done..very well done!
~Hugs~

Martie

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5 posted 2003-10-01 12:30 PM

Karilea

This made me want to write something beautiful, because IWIHWT...but my muse is still missing. Deep and beautiful!

n2dmystic
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beyond the doors of perception

6 posted 2003-10-01 01:14 PM

"the words left behind

of the depth

of a soul

in search"

um, yup, I want one of those. mystic gratitude to you.

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

7 posted 2003-10-01 01:50 PM

Wonderful Karilea!! Strange that I am wearing Cinnabar perfume right now....my favourite

hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Kaoru

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where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-10-01 03:20 PM

Always unique and well written! Love this!

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2003-10-01 05:28 PM

You, my Sunshinygirl, you BLOW me away.

Maree

it's a

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2003-10-02 09:45 AM

YES!

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Patricia
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11 posted 2003-10-02 03:56 PM

"A spirit in gasp." So good, K. Today was passive...but look out tomorrow. There is fine line between optimism and realism. I am realistic enough to know I better put my running shoes on and leave the high heels at home tomorrow.

An excellent write!

Patricia

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12 posted 2003-10-02 04:07 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you draw such clever comparisons and imagine all the other accessories may have an effect! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

allamericanjoe
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13 posted 2003-10-02 04:11 PM

very nice, I got goosbumps! I'm new here and not a critic, but I know when I get goosbumps that something has been well said.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2003-10-02 04:34 PM

this left me wanting more.....amazing piece sunny lady...

Lauren~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

Magnus

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15 posted 2003-10-02 04:41 PM

Nothing like mixing (separately, of course)
the delicate fragrance of a lady's perfume
with the dark harshness of iron gall, the
perfect ink...for one's mind to concoct and
lay upon the mind...a potion of poetic
expression....

Ratleader

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16 posted 2003-10-02 11:15 PM

This…
is as deep as a feeling
may delve

           the very midst
           the core of being

It would require
a mixture
of cinnabar and iron gall ~
then a special form
of calligraphy

           inked depth as
           deep as thought

if you were to view
only
the words left behind

           two dimensions
           speaking three

of the depth

            three dimensions
            telling four

of a soul

            four dimensions
            yearning toward

in search

            one

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Ratleader

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17 posted 2003-10-02 11:16 PM

Yes, I like this very much.

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angelblueyes
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18 posted 2003-10-03 01:00 AM

WOW!!!!You continue to amaze me each time.

Crystal

suthern

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19 posted 2003-10-07 09:20 PM

This/these are beautiful, lady... something to savor... and what lovely responses! *S*

coyote
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20 posted 2003-10-07 09:27 PM

If you stare hard into this piece it just gets deeper.....

Loved it as always.

coyote

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Here, Now, Forever

21 posted 2003-10-07 09:41 PM

enjoyed

garysgirl

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22 posted 2003-10-08 01:49 AM

Combining potions
Extracting soul emotions
A spirit in gasp

Karilea,
I love this.
Beautiful writing,
as always.

Hugs

Ethel

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