Open Poetry #29 |
A False Love |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
When you once held her hand and her heart for an eternity Did you see the pain in her eyes I saw it reflecting back at me It screamed at me with silent cries She tried to get you to understand But understand you did not Begging with you to listen with your heart not your ears Instead though you turned off your emotion, too involved with your own fears While you were so sure of yourself She was the one left in doubt I heard the pain in her voice To you though...she had to shout Why did you even love her If you knew this was how it would end? Do you realise the pain you've caused No this broken heart...you can't mend The birds heard her laughing once So did I That was before reality set in for her And she said her final "goodbye" The rain forming all around her Yet somehow she still cares about you I'll never understand her heart I'm here though to help her through When the the time comes and she leaves And you're trying to figure out why Perhaps you should look within yourself And realise...to your own self you did lie "love is like a butterfly-- if you chase it, it will surely fly away,instead hold it close and watch it grow into something beautiful" ~me~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (10-03-2003 07:02 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, this is so true and so powerful. Thank you for sharing Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Amy...it's hard to see a loved one hurt in this way, the pain you feel is in your words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Powerful write Amy....well done! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Living a lie can truly be the biggest embarrassment, dearest friend, knowing all that you feel is a facsimile later then wondering exactly what is real! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to the loved one hurt here, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have a heart that's sensitive and sweet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Strong and moving words. I can relate to your poem, felt every word! ~ARH |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
ouch! been on both sides of this. very nice write. thank you Peace, Joe |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, AmyAmister..very gentle smile...you have done well here, my friend, in words as well as in thoughts..well done indeed |
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