Open Poetry #29 |
The Hidden |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The Hidden It's the brilliance that lights up your smile when early morning bends. It's splendor that displays itself as dreamtime nears its end. It's opulence of friendship's hand that reaches in your touch. Through words the riches show their face a welcome sight of such. It takes the place of loneliness when farewells steal away. When tarnished rubbings dull the cast yet ease the worried fray. It's words that come from lips to hand and cross the river divide. And conquer, that in truth to find the hidden art inside. M *just a little something to feed my addiction...while waiting "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
nice.. very nice... *** I shall reply in rhyme to you these words speak of themselves, they do the river divide they are in time.. .. born of mind and hand. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just a little something to feed my addiction...while waiting something well said, id say and what are we waiting for, do we even know anymore? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you ES... I love responses in rhyme... "these words speak of themselves" yes they do...for some. M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Michele, amazing how hard it is to get by without Passions and all the friends we've made... hugs to you M |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
beautiful! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The hidden in the mind is what brings the sun to shine the way...very gentle smile to you |
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