Open Poetry #29 |
Round yourself up to the nearest hundred |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Round yourself up to the nearest hundred How many times have you been here done this Coward self afflicted silence keeper of ums and ahs Speak so you can be heard I want to walk amongst every crawling excuse Lover of peace? why not grant me peace of mind Beyond the rules of repetition cascading so gracefully into pools of infinity Another lie another try another year with you How many surfaces hearts and bones have you used to prop yourself? round it up to the nearest hundred |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"How many surfaces hearts and bones have you used to prop yourself? round it up to the nearest hundred" I know this person... Excellent! Susan |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
wow intense, you painted a very vivid picture here, liked it... "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - it must be close to a hundred to round up, that's many in my opinion. Nice write... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
venom i likes it |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'm impressed... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Awesome. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) If it can be rounded up to the nearest hundredth, I believe the whole mystery will be solved and wrapped up in a neat little package, if there is a remainder left, then I'd suggest retreating! (sad sigh) You speak of this anguish so eloquently, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
you speak riot i love to diet from your ever lasting empty lining. i have one too. male. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Jeeez, I just re read this, an hell, do I sound bitter or what? Susan, amazing how many spineless snake-humans are slithering around eh? (ack did it again, I AM bitter, and angry!) Eor, Glad you did, it was theraputic to write. Bill, sweet man, yep, or maybe thousands. Thankyou for reading me. Raphaella, yessssss precious, he trixxxed me! Dunc, Thankyou m dear, can I have a kitty yet? Meg, Noah, "If it can be rounded up to the nearest hundredth, I believe the whole mystery will be solved and wrapped up in a neat little package, if there is a remainder left, then I'd suggest retreating!" ~ I love that. your words make for such beautiful images, packaging up the grief, into a neat package. sound satisfying. Thankyou, xxx John B, you have one too? aaargh, my sympathies. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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