Open Poetry #29 |
ZENKU |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
More than trunk and leaves. Tall tree standing silently. A sanctuary. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
yes, nice in it's brevity. Made me wish for more. Larry [This message has been edited by dingusjr (09-30-2003 07:22 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks Larry |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes.. nicely done... sanctuary they are... enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, Ron! I am lucky to have a huge tree outside my window, and it seems to be home to several song birds. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sancuary and majestic angels, rising to the heavens... Made me think of the great and beautiful forests on the East Coast. What a lovely time of year out here (South Eastern PA)for long drive up North to a quiet bed and breakfast, a good book, and a lovely walk in the woods. Hmmmmmm, see what you've done, gave me something to think about doing. Thanks, and have a wonderful day. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy, you know, especially after it rains I look to the tree and am left in such awe of her beauty She gives to everyone yet asks nothing in return but a bit of sun and rain Just like someone I know *smile* xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you made me look up Zenku, and I found some interesting information... you're a sneaky wench, you are... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Kacy? Sometimes *blush*, I see them as firewood futures... But yes, Sanctuary! Nice one! Ed [This message has been edited by wranx (10-01-2003 10:40 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to all ! Karilea, LOL at your comment. Actually, my version is a combo of Zen and Haiku, my own little playword that triggers my imagination. But I do know about that Karate stance. |
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