Open Poetry #29 |
Angel (Meg's challenge) |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
thoughts scattered waiting in silent reverie emotions lie wide awake not feeling good enough ...I need some distraction Oh, beautiful release... sweet lullaby hypnotizing unecessary insecurities ...In the arms of the angel fly away from here... continously hitting rewind falling deeper within the endlessness ...Let me be empty Oh, and weightless And maybe I'll find some peace tonight... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-30-2003 12:00 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I do enjoy the song you speak of, so wonderfully you do! Thank you for meeting this challenge so well, darling. |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
this is the most exotic, flowing description of insomnia. beautifully written Peace, Joe |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice... this floats on the mind as it sets the scene, of listening once..then again..and again..to something that moves you... well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sweet lullaby hypnotizing unecessary insecurities What a great write and encouragement to all of us. To shake those nasty evil little insecurities, whatever they may be and get out there and kick...well, you know. Smiles and hugs...and thank you for the great morning read. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
ah Sarah, breaks my heart everytime..awesome Kris hugs |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris? I know . . . me too http://www.sarahmclachlan.com/f_discography.html go here scroll down to Aida click it on , click angel - the little tv Kris and watch the most beautiful rendition which you have so eloquently displayed here . . . Beautiful writing as always and challenge succeeded xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-30-2003 04:30 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh one of my favorites... Beautiful!!! Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristen, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, "Angel" is my favorite Sarah McLachlan song along with "Good Enough" and "Aria" being personal favorites and I don't believe any song, with the possible exception of U2's "Walk On", can absolutely grasp the magnitude of emotion and compassion during recent tragedies and comfort! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
breathe . . . angels do need air too |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
OMG thank you all!! and Noah thank you...LOVE IT!! to all...yanno this was really hard to write..didn't think it would be "good enough" Ohh duh I'm sucha blonde..Sue..thanks for the link the lil video made me cry you're soo good to me... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (10-01-2003 11:47 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I always enjoy reading your poetry, Dear Kristen! This was lovely! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Kristen, this was lovely and amazing.This is one of my favorite songs and it brought me tears of joy reading this. Crystal |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful mind. |
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