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One Less Worry
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One Less Worry |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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One Less Worry There you are "always," a ballad of my heart from a distance, like that azure sky. You were that sliver of moon, peeking out and above crooking my way, inviting me to remember "always" and let the midnight seize me in all its splendor. It was a gift last night, facing me traveling, my left hand controlling, my right searching for the song words to soothe, to wrap me in memories and warmth, from the coolness of the falling temperatures. Nothing else matters when you rise to my thoughts and I create a scenic view to worry one less, with the you of you. I wrote my thoughts in mind past the roads of yesterday, never remembering the how or when, but always the why before reaching my destination, and finding little scraps of you papered in ink to pick up and take me... to a time of one less worry. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-02-2003 10:00 AM).] |
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Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Thank you I enjoyed the thought  It brings back past memories |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen,  Enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'finding little scraps of you papered in ink to pick up and take me... to a time' Oh my ... the perfection of thoughts-naked, speak to me~ And I must listen~ Thanking you I am~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Marty and Sy Marge...more days of traveling back and forth tiring me to no end...whatever that truly means  I do feel "shell shocked"...don't you hate cliche's so if you see me poking my nose in here occasionally, I am reading more than responding trying to squeeze some enjoyment into my life for now. Thank you hugsssss, Maureen |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You map your thoughts and wind them through the sea of emotions, so beautifully Maureen~ Your title reminds me of something I wrote long ago, "One Less Wish to Make" Sometimes it's better to let them find you, or leave you, as they should. Love you~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You've said it well. This reminds me of something that I haven't thoughtof in awhile.Nicely penned.  Crystal |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Nicely worded! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
I've missed your work (I haven't been around for about six months), yet you were one of the first people I was looking forward to hearing from. The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I enjoyed this so much Maureen travelling ones mind with warm memories to view , this I also often do Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was so pretty, a very caring humble write, so honest and right. Thank you |
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