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So If I Weep ...
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So If I Weep ... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Through the mists of mourning rains drops of regret beads of pains tear against endless moments lost to such heartfelt torments Tears of joy of which smiles brought saddened by those that were not easing laughter from the heart flowing timeless to end from start So if I weep it's okay ... eyes do seep such times away in these memories of you my eyes cry and soul bleeds through with each tearfall all can see what you've always meant to me One's outlook can be another's expression. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Tears of joy of which smiles brought saddened by those that were not easing laughter from the heart flowing timeless to end from start So if I weep it's okay ..." WOW..just, wow.. powerful stuff.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yes this is beautiful in a wistful way.. Susan |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The heart only knows for sure~ Like a dream that is sweet? Or somethin' like that~  |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
write on, friend. that was vivid. beautiful to my eyes. thank you Peace, Joe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Craig...lemme hold ya awhile |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
So if I weep it's okay ... eyes do seep such times away in these memories of you my eyes cry and soul bleeds through with each tearfall all can see what you've always meant to me Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you are beautiful m friend! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this expands the meaning of life, there is no shame in admition, but gallentry in humbleness...the spiritual maturity to realize your weakness, expresses change in the making, a desire for someone else besides yourself...how great love is...and what it can cultivate and grow...fine art in the making my friend, and a heart of gold. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gotta hold ya some more |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 heres a hankie.......from me to you......... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss such sad words filling your eyes....but said as only you can....   Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo sympathetic and beautiful as you have a chivalrous heart that only wishes to be with and comfort the hearts of lovers, like Boccaccio did for women with Decameron! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CTOwen~ As I told someone earlier ... my thoughts and feelings are being written by others~ 'So if I weep it's okay ... eyes do seep such times away in these memories of you' Yes ... yes, it is okay~ Thank you for this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Craig, I can remember when you first came here and replied to one of my poems in the begining and I don't remember exactly what it was that you said at the minute, but I do know that this poem touched me today as much as your comment that day did. You do have an incredible way with words.... this seems so very sad, hugs to you... It's better than I could have planned.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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