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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-11-14 10:28 AM



I Was Thinking This Through

Should I write you a letter
Its indecision on my part
I have hesitated for days
Wondering where to start  
    
Having only two choices
Should I write or do I wait
Situations might change
Once more I procrastinate

Delaying the task in hand
I wonder what should I do
Would it be the right time
I was thinking this through

Could I have left it too late
By hesitating another day
Should I take the chance
Knowing time slips away

HopeĀ©2003

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-11-14 10:38 AM


well girl, you've done it again...a very good write from your heartfelt mind...

I'd write anyway, seeing as it's never to late...besides...clearning matters up even if in your own mind...converts even the most difficult of climbs into a smooth path, when we can sit down and adimre the flowers it
projects...

But then, thats my focus...

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-11-14 10:42 AM


Hey Lee , thank you for your kind hearted reply .... yes I shall give it a try

Hope

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-11-14 10:56 AM


HopeS,
Lee gave you good advice, either way you'll have an answer. Excellent write.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-14 11:27 AM


You can really pull a reader into your world, Dear Hope! Personally, I am of the mind to speak one's mind, be it verbally or through the written word. You express yourself so well through poetry, that perhaps you could include a poem from your heart in your letter.

~ May all turn out for your highest and best. Be happy! Have hope!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-11-14 01:13 PM


Thank you Seymour , sometimes he not too forthcoming with answers , but yes I shall still ask

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-11-14 01:15 PM


thank you Linda , your reply is so much appreciated , oh he as been sent most of my poems because they are mostly for him , its just that he's not been around to send a reply and i do not know why

Hope

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7 posted 2003-11-14 02:27 PM


Hope~
Oh god girl .. do it yesterday~

Good inking, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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8 posted 2003-11-14 02:37 PM




(smiles) When it all seems too late to do something, remember that we are young at heart forever and its never too late to acknowledge anything! (sigh) Let it be heard, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana
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9 posted 2003-11-14 04:30 PM


enjoyed
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