navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Less Thans
Open Poetry #29
Post A Reply Post New Topic Less Thans Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-27 09:23 PM



Her wait
weighs heavier
though slighter
than ever


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2003-09-27 09:25 PM


Your writings amaze me!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-09-27 09:28 PM


Sorry Sauni, I was in bed..trying to sleep and that line came to my head and would not let me rest until I came down and wrote it somewhere. And as I didn't want to add anything else to it, it became a 10 or less...

thank you for your kind words...

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-11-14 12:52 PM


dang...very cool and very sad
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-11-14 01:08 AM


Oh...
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2003-11-14 01:36 PM


Wynter~
This is an ache that needed to be written~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

6 posted 2003-11-14 02:02 PM


Hi nakdthoughts...what a line! Now you have it running in my head over and over. I can see what you had to write it down. Now I might have to play with it to get it out of my head. (Giggle!) Love it!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
7 posted 2003-11-14 02:06 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this hurts so very much and I too am amidst a wait for even finding a special friend, as I know the time of waiting is running out but its density is beyond comprehension! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upn you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

8 posted 2003-11-14 03:19 PM


Wow...!!!!


Eric

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
9 posted 2003-11-14 04:27 PM


nice read
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Less Thans

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary