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Bedsheet Cape
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Bedsheet Cape By: Noah Eaton 9/21/03 I look like a king in the glass house I've pomegranate on a Tuesday morning I've got these adamantine affectations Bred-in-the-bone, shaped for sizing Bel esprit Grade-A butterfly bullock Bustling between busman's holidays I leap high off my hamstring Cruise-control renegade I've never jumped so high, I've never felt so free I'm a jack of all trades, and I'll give everything Check out these gazelle moves, this whooping crane attitude This is my love song to a little boy's imagination in June Whoa, bedsheet cape Hey hey hey, bedsheet cape Whoa, bedsheet cape Hey hey hey, bedsheet cape You know you've got bridges to burn You know you've got pills to swallow You know you've got a Holy Grail to search for You know you've got to write that novel Then you clean up that basket case Then you blow that final gasket Then you solve all those fractions Then you report all those infractions I've never jumped so high, I've never felt so free I'm a jack of all trades, and I'll give everything Check out these gazelle moves, this whooping crane attitude This is my love song to a little boy's imagination in June I've measured the thermostat, I've read the kymograph I wrote my own epitaph, then erased that I've caught the copycat, I've been exposed with a free hand I've committed freelance, danced with ants in my pants I've measured the thermostat, I've read the kymograph I wrote my own epitaph, then erased that I've caught the copycat, I've been exposed with a free hand I've committed freelance, danced with ants in my pants Look now at where I am I'm heedless, seamless, free-wheeling I've taken this Pop Rock frenzy and chugged it down I'm Goody-Goody Two Shoes striding on French heels I've never jumped so high, I've never felt so free I'm a jack of all trades, and I'll give everything Check out these gazelle moves, this whooping crane attitude This is my love song to a little boy's imagination in June Whoa, bedsheet cape Hey hey hey, bedsheet cape Whoa, bedsheet cape Hey hey hey, bedsheet cape Whoa, bedsheet cape Hey hey hey, bedsheet cape Whoa, bedsheet cape Hey hey hey, bedsheet cape I'll wear you proud, wear you everyday... I'll wear you proud, wear you everyday... I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-21-2003 06:41 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this,, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
this is so adorible noah. I can just imagine you singing this  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I've said it before, and i'll say it again, youre like a living john lennon.  i was singing this out loud!  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Look now at where I am I'm heedless, seamless, free-wheeling I've taken this Pop Rock frenzy and chugged it down I'm Goody-Goody Two Shoes striding on French heels I've never jumped so high, I've never felt so free I'm a jack of all trades, and I'll give everything Check out these gazelle moves, this whooping crane attitude This is my love song to a little boy's imagination in June Yippee, Noah!!! I love this!! It makes me want to sing and dance all over the place. LOL Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, how I wish you could add your voice and the music to the words for all of us to hear you sing. This evoked wonderful images my friend. Huggles, Marti |
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devin_lupus New Member
since 2003-09-22
Posts 9Ohio, USA |
Brilliantly done! I really liked this! Please come visit <a href="http://poetrycorner.tycoontown.com">The Poetry Corner!</a> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I can hear your tune and voice in this. Crystal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of a childrens storybook...James |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Lovely write, combination of little boys dreams and words of stories, nicely blended. |
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