Open Poetry #29 |
Missing You |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Missing, you Missing...your words. Missing the heart, the soul, the breath of you. Your black Cadillac at a Friendly's parking lot...missing the car, missing you. No one to laugh with, no one to share my innermost secrets with. Miss you, need you Miss walking step in step, hand in hand. Missing your arms wrapped tightly around me. Miss you...cry out for you. My heart beats a steady rhythm, a steady song...missing your touch, missing your smile, missing your easy manner. You hold my heart inside your heart. Miss your essence, miss your nearness. Mostly, I just... miss you, miss you, miss you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Not a fun place to be. Here's hoping a speedy healing for your heart. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
May you soon feel fulfilled and happy again. Crystal |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The song of longing ... deeply felt! Love, Margherita |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Very touching, been there. Nice write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Mordecai's Mommy Junior Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 12San Miguel, Ca |
Your writing could be taken so many ways. Sorry for your loss, for I have been there too. Good luck in healing... Mordecai's Mommy Like a dove, I am now flying free |
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