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Stairway to Heaven (Megs Challenge)
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Stairway to Heaven (Megs Challenge) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Sometimes words have two meanings failing miserably and all of our thoughts are misgiven. Lost in the day to day shuffle long gone and buried under the pain eroded and scarred. Engrave on my head stone forgive the sins of her heart let me climb the stairway to heaven gracefully and be in tune with the peace that escapes me remember me when, graciously. ~*~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
l@ved this |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I am a huge Led Zeppelin fan and can play the entire song with the exception of the long solo! This song has always touched me deeply because I truly feel it is one explosive crescendo, each minute feels like one is closer to heaven until finally you feel completely rejuvenated, it's truly the mantra of rock and roll! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is marvelous, I have to try this challenge myself, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting creation. Love it. Love you, Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for lovin' it big guy~ Hugs ya Raph~Noah~ Thanks for sharing those pictures with me, and for all the light you shine my way. ~ My take is always a bit askew, thank you Margherita~ You're too sweet!!! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 this rocks bluesy! I'm keeping it. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
One of the best songs ever (Does Noah have a picture for everything?) Nicely done, Bluesy! Susan |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
he he. I think he has, he's on a roll today!we should do requests! I got some pics of the beatles on my reply. Thanks noah if you read this! ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
let me climb the stairway to heaven gracefully and be in tune with the peace that escapes me Awesome words!!! talented words for a great song. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hmmmm...if I read this backwards wonder where it will lead???  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - I wonder at times why the peace is so eluding... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you did, just that. Well done, Dear... |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
And when I'm gone, there'll be one child born in this world to carry on - the cycle of life, we can but try to leave our mark. Well done, very well done. ~ becky |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Rock and roll gemma, and thanks~ Susan~ I'm thinking he has a whole collection. Thanks for reading me. Ringo~ Thanks for your nice reply, I'll get there yet! Most likely it would lead back to the beginning, and I'm not going there again. Thanks Dunc~ Like so many things elude us, it's a long drawn out process hmmm? Thank you BC~ Does my heart good to see you here Karilea~ I appreciate it. Becky~ Such a nice reply, thank you for that~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, this is amazing, as all of your work. Well met, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . If there's a bustle in the hedgegrow . . . don't be alarmed now . . . it's just a spring clean for the May queen . . . Beautiful challenge and write and OMG I adore Zeppelin nice singing Bluesy tweets xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
let me climb the stairway to heaven gracefully and be in tune with the peace that escapes me remember me when, graciously. Lori, I love the whole poem, it's beautiful... especially this ending...  Hugs  Ethel |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Bluesy when we hear the wind blow, we will all know Your prescence lives, in the whispering wind... Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (09-29-2003 11:29 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes words have two meanings failing miserably and all of our thoughts are misgiven yes...and yes... challenge nicely met M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Engrave on my head stone forgive the sins of her heart let me climb the stairway to heaven gracefully and be in tune with the peace that escapes me remember me when, graciously. My time's been so limited lately that I'm not familiar with the challenge... but I'm sure glad I didn't miss this superb poetry! This is beautiful. *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes I think we're lucky if they only have two meanings.... But never have the slightest worry about being remembered, nor the slightest doubt that you will be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
An awesome write and a challenge well met. Crystal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Sometimes words have two meanings failing miserably and they do time and time again, dont know why eveyone cant see what i feel.... back to the original.......blonde bombshell photo, yes this is my favorite of the 2 you look like the sun left the clouds to kiss only you |
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