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Meeting You... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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MEETING YOU I noticed your eyes so blue They sparkled in the room I heard your voice so calm and resonant I saw your smile so warm and welcoming to me I felt your handshake so strong and firm Was it just me or did you hold my hand Longer than you should have Things are never as they seem Life is short People do crazy things I should have told you that Your eyes sparkled when you smiled Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hindsight, eh?...I'm smiling - I always love seeing your work, Roniece - and this piece is wonderfully introspective... I enjoyed...  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Nan thank you so much! I am very excited as tonight I became a 'Senior Member' with passions with my 500th post!! how marvelleous and what a wonderful place to be! Roniece |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wonderful write,, congrats on 500,, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A memorable moment in time! Carpe diem--Seize the day! We too often let these moments slip by us!---Perhaps you should have told him that his eyes sparkle when he smiles!  I loved this write! You made him very real to me!--also reminded me of my own moment in time which I let slip through my fingers!  EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Was it just me or did you hold my hand Longer than you should have ~*~ Hmmmm...a special meeting, a special post... Seems to me, you're not the only one enjoying the moment! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Roneice - this is absolutley beautiful I ,too . . . know this well hoping it is always there for you xxoo |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
What a lovely poem. Oh! Those sparkling eyes.They will emain in your memory a life time. Bon-Bon  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Love rule #1: If you think it might be, you already know it is. Your heart's just a bit too far ahead of you to hear clearly. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Congratulations, senior! Susan |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Roniece, you made this very real. It was like I was watching you shake hands with this person.  Hugs Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is excellent. I lived a lifetime in my teens of those what ifs and why didn't I, and the hesitance and uncertainty of the signals, ever slight, given subtly to another.... Love, so powerful yet confusing.....huh? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am so happy you're back as we have all missed you sooooooo much! (big hugggssssss) Love can be so confusing but I truly believe it is always worth a shot because unrequited love is always a heartbreak but if you at least try to go for love and if you get disappointment in the end, at least you knew the truth and felt for that moment what love can truly be! (sigh) May your golden heart always receive the true love it deserves, sweet friend, God Bless You, and Congratulations on 500 wonderful posts, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Roniece, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this so much... and congratulations on becoming a senior member! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
meeting for the first time always gives us something to hope for and a memory we never forget! ~enjoyed ARH |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Yes Nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
sounds like to like him...but did you let him know...James |
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