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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-13 02:21 PM

come
touch my lips
with light caress

the lips of heavy

this is the mortal’s promise
to lay off rage
and to become weak
as reward

the lips
they will be desert’s play
and i will watch
in return for my
hide

the necessity for unrecognition
the latest obsolete desire for same change

mine is the definition of free-caged.

root
basis
origin of deprivation
luck of lackness
and my existence is a patch over cause.

the same is the reason for creating
the same
constantly evolving.

starve my skin
to extinction,
my gain of hide.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-13 02:21 PM

I really liked this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-11-13 02:38 PM

that's deep

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-11-13 02:54 PM

This is really deep.

Cold hands means a warm heart

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-11-13 03:20 PM

mine is the definition of free-caged.

--Awesome line right there.

Loved this

darkatnoon
Junior Member

since 2003-11-07

Posts 11

5 posted 2003-11-14 11:34 AM

sick animals and genious minds always die alone...

darkatnoon
Junior Member

since 2003-11-07

Posts 11

6 posted 2003-11-14 11:40 AM

reading this takes me far beyond deserts...ou,you get better and better(I'm curious to discover how fast and how deep).deep is not deep enough to suit you!out of this world,brother {}!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-11-14 02:56 PM

'sick animals and genious minds always die alone...'

couldn't write a better reply so i'll steal and nod

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-11-14 04:03 PM

(smiles) Oh petre, I love the raw beauty of this, sweet friend, let it get to your skin and just pinch your head, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Petre, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-11-14 04:27 PM

enjoyed

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