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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-09-26 08:11 PM

hearts
twinned,
the halves
of a shell

neither
can open
without
the other

break one
and
both
shatter

~~J

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-26 08:12 PM

Walnuts

husked
hearts

removed
shells

wither

~*~

Hugging your inspire...

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

2 posted 2003-09-26 08:15 PM

Ooh, I like it!

~~J

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2003-09-26 08:19 PM

Jamie...So impactful!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2003-09-26 09:53 PM

great stuff...from my dribble...h

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-09-26 10:41 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Yes, for twins are of the same heart and depend on each other! (sigh) Your heart speaks with heart and soul, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2003-09-26 11:03 PM

Thank you, Mistletoe. Twinned hearts, when the very souls are united, live together, break together, and yes, I believe they can return, whole and ready, to unite the life to come.

Yeah, Slick, like you don't know how good you are -- Jamie ain't fooled for a minute.

Impactful! Gack! I've been punished with a Martie pun!

~~J

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

7 posted 2003-09-26 11:44 PM

I have enjoyed the truth in all your poems sir. This one in particular..
got my attention. Thanks!
Larry.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2003-09-26 11:50 PM

So AWESOME! I actually thought of my twin sister lol and though it could go so many ways, this hit me. Great write!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-09-28 06:36 PM

A perfect fit... perfect reflection of all that's important to one another. *S* Both succeed... or both break... forever entwined. *S*

I like this very much! *S*

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