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watch me latin |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Now the cotton's listening fingering a gypsy dance tiny cross of silver gleam salvation burning in my chest as I dazzle cherry tips watching this a singer's stance salsa and a hip's romance with the would-be's in the air... watch me latin side to side syncopated licking lies beneath a cobra dance of lid... hungry hungry hungry thighs and an ass performancing with a hand of tummy tight. lightly sprite I'm loving this pulling you... too tight to me. Now. The cotton's listening. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-28-2003 07:03 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Celeste....... I never understand your stuff completely but it's always so sensuous that it's really a turn on to read. Some great metaphors spread around in this piece. Good write! Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And here I thought the bacon was on when I heard the sizzlin'...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - I hear the cotton listening well... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity I'd say your fever was around 105. Take an asprin and go to bed. But I did enjoy your dance.  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I'd watch you Latin....or Spanish, French(!), Greek, Chinese, Swahili.... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well, Autumn is the time for sprites and dryads to dance freely unashamed by human foolishness or contrived propriety. The question is in the rhythm, the answer is in the dance. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wow sen...hot stuff...h |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sizzle |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow, Karen... You're burning up the page here! Smiling at you, I am...  Love you, lady...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've gotta thank Carlos Santana for the inspiration. Him and the good people who produce Cuervo.  Hugs all. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love your vibrant voice here, sweet friend, I'll be that flamenco guitarist in the corner strumming rasguerdo! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully passionate, welcome to the Latin Quarter, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
call me cotton and roll me away. loved it. sensuously mmmmmmm. Peace, Joe |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Carlos Santana, eh?  He is one of my favorite guitarists of all time, and he too inspires beats in my poetry and song. Many of my poems are inspired by another Latin sensation...Shakira! Her grace and Santana's melody are both big inspirations to me!I really enjoyed this, sweet friend! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hugging Noah. OH THANK YOU... I do adore that man...and yes, I saved those. (and mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm his eyes? Did ya'll look into those eyes? He's just the sweetest soul...the witch has been melted, yet again....) mymymymymy......... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Alas...as I read this I had Bob Marley on.. But how I love everything Latin...especially the men...yummmmmmm I want to learn the dance... Thanks Karen, for leaving me wanting... sigh. Susan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You're one of a kind Luscious. Absolutely! Another  M fate is not just |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Karen- I have to agree with Eric.. I might not always get the ideas,or the imagery, yet I always enjoy the masterful way that you put the words together. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! You sizzle girl!! Love ya lady! ~Hugs~
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