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The Continuing |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
it is was will be always our middle of love even at the start we knew it was not our beginning even then we merely continued |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
really do love your writes, I have come to look you up on these pages. Another keeper ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful awareness of a love that IS. Love, Margherita  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie I like the thought of this...and I guess it's true, that a forever love, has only a middle. Perhaps the middle is filled with beginnings that go on and on until there is the realization that there is no end, and therefore no need for beginnings, just continuance. You made my head swim with this lovely verse!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
James, this is wonderful!! I'm with Marge, in that you can open up my mind and make it spin with new thoughts!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm liking this!!!! even at the start we knew it was not our beginning even then we merely continued That's a nice compromise if you ask me! Morning James A_ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice, very nice |
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
Enjoyed this. Chelsea [This message has been edited by CP (09-28-2003 12:52 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Awesome write, James. You made me rethink some things I thought were settled...definitely something I needed to do. A wonderful write! Patricia |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
There is much to be said for continuing...and the beginning is not always the best place to start after all. Sometimes meeting someone halfway make the journey much quicker  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I too believe love has no beginning or end, but I also feel it has no middle and love truly "is"! (big hugggssssss) There is no boundaries or time in love, just simply being and feeling, that's the magic of it all, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
James~ I so completely understand this... so much so you can never know... Susan |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
even at the start we knew it was not our beginning even then we merely continued These words are put together so perfectly. There is no improving this. It was thoroughly enjoyed. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful love this must be... to have been... even before being known. *S* Superb write! |
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